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Should I stop, or go on.....  

Caliba

9/24/2011 5:06 am
writing my story.

I just started to write a story, but wonder if I should go on. What do you think?

She enters the room. Quiet and demure.

I wait, see what she will do.

She’s uncomfortable, doesn’t know what to do, what to expect. So she kneels down, her eyes downcast, silent. She knows not to speak until she’s spoken to.

I keep quiet, and wait some more. The clock ticks, one minute, two minutes… Observing how her cheeks slowly redden, how the open hands on her thighs start trembling. Is it anticipation or fear?

Suddenly I get up, and walk around her, looking at her from all sides. I grab her hair, and yank her head down to her back. Startled she looks up, right into my eyes, and I smile. She closes her eyes, as I stroke her cheek.


I used to be a Babe In Total Control of Herself, but I'm a Woman now. So go figure what I am...

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